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Saturday, November 16, 2024

THREE CROWS AT DAVID GILMOUR’S LAST CONCERT ON HIS 2024 WORLD TOUR

by Terri Kirby Erickson




Sitting in front of us at David Gilmour’s Sunday night

show at Madison Square Garden, is a family of three—

mother, father, and teenage son. I have never seen hair 

so glossy and black, as if they are enchanted crows that 

will fly out of the stadium once the concert is over and 

the spell is broken. But for now, mother and son look 

like a painting called Madonna and Child, so close they 

are, so intricately bonded. He keeps laying his cheek 

against her shoulder, one dark head against another—

while his father gyrates and headbangs in his seat, fully

immersed in his experience of the incredible music, the 

multicolor lights. There is a tenderness to their boy, an 

innocence, as if he is a beloved only child not yet ready 

to leave the nest or mingle with other kids his age who 

would, by now, have toughened him up or damaged him 

in ways he cannot imagine. His parents will keep him

safe from anything that can cause him harm, or so they 

may believe. But my parents lost their only son when 

he was a few years older. I can still recall my father’s 

stoic façade, my mother’s decades of grief from which 

she could not be saved nor solaced. Meanwhile, David 

Gilmour goes on singing and playing his guitar while 

the boy splays his fine-boned fingers like talons on his 

mother’s arm, and his father belts those haunting lyrics 

like he wrote them—as if his body was never covered in 

feathers, his mouth an open beak crying cawcawcaw.

 


Terri Kirby Erickson is the author of seven collections of poetry. Her work has appeared in Asheville Poetry Review, Rattle, The SUN, and numerous other publications. Her awards include the Joy Harjo Poetry Prize, International Book Award for Poetry, and the Annals of Internal Medicine Poetry Prize among many others. She lives in North Carolina, USA.