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Wednesday, March 04, 2026

MASS SHOOTING #9



“Two people dead in Detroit shooting at funeral repast, police say”

CBS News Detroit



by Ron Riekki





“Justice is what love sounds like when it speaks in public.”

—Michael Eric Dyson

from Can You Hear Me Now?:

The Inspiration, Wisdom, and Insight of Michael Eric Dyson



75 days since the last mass shooting in Michigan,
But that’s over with the warmth, having back-to-back
 
mass shootings on Feb 19 and Feb 27.  One in Flint,
one in Detroit.  I drive to the one in Detroit first,
 
the shooting happening at a “funeral repast,”
a phrase I’d never heard before, a gathering after
 
a funeral.  Where two more would be killed.
On the drive there, I see a park and think to myself
 
how nice that they have a park here, until I realize
it’s not a park, but a cemetery, that seems to go on
 
and on and on, and on the same street a billboard of
RECOVERY IS HERE / HOPE IS HERE next to
 
a cannabis shop, a couple of liquor stores, one
with a wide OPEN sign, massive glowing white
 
sign, a vulgar-sized sign, as if the OPEN has more
than one meaning, as I think of stores being open
 
late at night when everything else seems closed
and mouths open to swallow alcohol that turns
 
into acetaldehyde, toxic, classified as carcinogenic,
Jekyll and Hyde, and hid to the side is a closed club,
 
sign saying Escape Lounge, a cell-like building,
reminiscent of incarceration, windowless from what
 
I can see, and I think of Escape, its meanings,
fantasy, and for real, the risks of escape, and there,
 
so near, is the spot of the mass shooting, two killed,
two injured, and so many of these mass shootings,
 
over and over, are in areas that feel apocalyptic,
post-apocalyptic, pre-apocalyptic, barren, not one
 
person walking by the entire time I was there, empty
streets, the rare car, and fence, always fence, so
 
much fence, barbed-wired fence, but with gaps,
where it’d be easy to squeeze through the fence,
 
by the Smile you are on candid camera warning
that warns no one, ghosts, the creepy feel, always
 
so creepy, how empty these areas are in the heart
of urban populations, the two-thirds of a million
 
people in Detroit, none here, not now, a full moon,
and, looking up, an American flag flapping on a pole,
 
a pole that looks like it may have been set on fire
once, long ago, and the flag, absolutely battered,
 
comically tattered, tragically tattered, flicking in
the wind, its large holes, a fuck-you flag, a forgotten
 
flag that seems to scream to tell a story, the full moon
behind it, an alarm somewhere going off, a parking
 
lot that feels the opposite of a lot, feels minimal,
and across the street a strange abandoned-looking
 
warehouse with a massive pile of metal-like boxes,
stacked, left, rusted, the feel that this is the sort of
 
place for a where-they-hide-the-body Sopranos
scene.  I’m sick of visiting these mass shootings,
 
wonder why I’ve committed myself to visiting
every mass shooting in Michigan, searching, trying
 
to find out when, who, why, what, how, but all
that seems to emerge is where, the place sticking
 
in my mind, the constant poverty of these places,
reminding me of a therapy emotion wheel I saw
 
that lists the ‘feelings’ of being ignored and being
victimized as being rooted in the feeling of being
 
abandoned, which is all rooted in sadness, this
ignored + victimized = abandoned = sadness,
 
and these are ignored buildings, victimized
buildings, buildings of sadness, abandoned
 
buildings, except ‘building’ isn’t right.  They
do not seem to be verbs, to be expressing action,
 
but instead express inaction.  What’s the opposite
of a verb?  And an alarm alarms always as
 
I stand there, constant alarm, somewhere, dis-
embodied, and it’s cold tonight, somewhere
 
in the mid-twenties, but these shootings happened
when it had warmed up, the 75 days without
 
a mass shooting due to the winter, no mass
shootings because there was no ‘mass.’
 
There were shootings here, nonstop, all
winter, but one person shot, two, three,
 
not ‘mass.’  Now, with the warmth, they’re
back.  And I drive away, to see a Coney
 
Island restaurant selling Kentucky dogs
and catfish dinners, vomit in its parking
 
lot.  A sign for CHILD CARE, another
sign for CHILD CARE, and it feels like
 
a wish, an instruct, a plea.  I stop at a bar,
open, a man stepping outside to smoke.
 
I approach.  By the time I get there, it’s
three men, smoking, chatting.  I interrupt,
 
tell them about the mass shooting so near
here, ask how we end the violence, tell them
 
I’m noticing it’s a theme of young black men
killing young black men.  These aren’t
 
young black men, but see themselves as
old black men, and they talk about young
 
black men, talking more than I’d have
guessed, opening up as if they’ve been
 
waiting to speak on this.  The first man
says, “I’ll kill someone before they kill
 
me.”  He leaves, goes inside the bar,
and another man replaces him.  We four
 
stand in a diamond shape.  Their names:
“Frank,” “Sam,” and “J.”  J is a hip-hop
 
artist, has no album, insists he’s not
a rapper, but a “hip-hop artist.”  It’s
 
open mic tonight.  The language goes
fast, faster than I can scribble: “A lot
 
of black folks go through poverty.”
“My grandma had fourteen kids.”
 
“I blame women.”  I interrupt, a bit
shocked at this, the first time this
 
has been said in the hundred people
or so I’ve interviewed so far at these
 
mass shooting sites.  And he brings up
childhood sexual trauma.  Again,
 
the first time this has been brought up
in the hundred or so interviews.
 
he talks about how this is happening
to young black boys.  I tell him he’s
 
the first person brave enough to say
this.  The man standing next to him
 
joins in, says, “I’m a victim of that.”
I say, “Childhood sexual trauma?”
 
He nods yes.  And the language takes
over again, this investment in their
 
words: “I’m not going to blame it all
on the women.”  “You need family.”
 
“Every person that’s a white person
has a family.”  “Kids raising kids.”
 
They talk over each other, at the same
time, not disrespectfully, but this isn’t
 
an academic question posed to some
academics.  I talked to two social
 
workers at U of M, asking the same
question, and their responses to me
 
felt textbook, crafted, safe, cliché,
emotionless.  This isn’t that.  They
 
talk bodily, about their bodies, arms
emphasizing, eye contact intense,
 
patting each other on the back, saying,
“Slavery fucked people up.”  “They
 
tricked us, man.”  “Get Trump out
of office.”  “No, no, that was way
 
before Trump.”  One tells us of his
Dad joining the Army, then becoming
 
a Detroit cop.  He says, “I stay in
the hood; I stay in poverty.”  “You
 
need the old wisdom.”  “They don’t
have tough love, so they don’t have
 
respect.”  “I’m a third-grade teacher.”
“The solution is putting that belt to
 
that ass.”  “I done seen people get
shot.”  The man to my left tells us
 
about his cousin being shot.  Where?
Right here.  Where exactly?  He points,
 
says his cousin was shot in the head
right here, in this hallway, right here.
 
He points at the hallway we can see
through the door of the bar.  Right
 
here, his cousin was shot in the head.
Where we’re standing.  Right here.
 
The pace picks up.  Adrenaline.
“Look at Emmett Till.”  “It’s all
 
about history.”  “I was in the Army
for sixteen years; I’ve seen a lotta shit.”
 
“We gotta get rid of these guns;
we gotta get rid of these drugs.”
 
“The government’s got to stop.”
“It’s the social media.”  “I play
 
saxophone.”  They smoke.  They
care.  They argue.  They agree.
 
“You gotta stop the guns.”  So
many of these interviews, no
 
one talks about guns.  The discussion
is mass shootings and no one
 
talks about the guns.  So many liberals
I talk to, they never talk about
 
the guns.  I talk to liberals who
own guns, and I don’t understand
 
it.  It’s like the NRA has tricked
them.  “Always stick together.”
 
“Everybody is in control of their
life.”  “This world is about dollars.”
 
What’s the root of the violence?
I ask them.  “Jealousy,” comes
 
the answer.  They talk about
poverty, about seeing wealth
 
on social media.  They “want.”
It’s getting colder.  Midnight
 
nearing.  People pour inside.
A man comes out, tells J he’s
 
about to go onstage soon, very
soon, telling him to get ready.
 
He’s got his hood up, red.
He’s a poet.  He’s about to
 
take stage.  I want to go in,
but I forgot to take any money.
 
I can’t go in.  I watch him
disappear into the hallway
 
where the man to my left
had his cousin get shot
 
in the head.  Right here.
Where we're standing.
 
 


Friday, June 27, 2025

LIKE CAPTURING AN IDEA

by Mary Janicke

 


abandoned
no longer important
 
a lone fence
facing south bars nothing
 
a symbol of folly
a symbol of power turned powerless
 
barriers can’t staunch the tide of humanity
that oozes around them like water
 
the migrants find their way
around the man made obstacles
 
in their search, in their dream 
of a better life


Mary Janicke is a gardener, poet, and writer. Her work has appeared in numerous journals.

Tuesday, June 20, 2023

THE SAGA OF AN ABANDONED PUNJABI BRIDE

by Vivek Sharma



They Married for a Life Abroad. But They Never Saw Their Husbands Again. —The New York TimesJune 14, 2023.

 

Thousands of brides in India are being abandoned by their British Indian husbands after they are married. Despite this, there is evidence to suggest that Indian women are continuing to fall for British suitors. —BBC NewsNovember 23, 2009.



In Candana, England, called Vilayat,
      My husband abides alone,
                   or with another,
he visits me sometimes in winter,
       some years, not at all,
                   and I live with his mother.

I am a middle-aged Punjabi dreamer,
      I practice English at home,
                tears smudge my notebook.
He promised me a visa and visits,
      but what if they were gambits
                 to freehire a family cook?

Jede Chadd ke chal gaye ne,                                       
         Mawan, dhiyan, khetran, gawan nu,                     
Undi raah kyun takdi aye,                                              
kyun aaun ge o tainu le jawan nu?                              

 

Those who have abandoned mothers,
         fields, daughters, villages, and gone,
Why do you wait for their return?
        Why would they take you along?


Occasionally, he calls from Vilayat,
       sweet-talker, whiskey breath,
                  I crave his love and sweat,
I rage, and he lends me an ear,
      tells me he hates it there,
                but says he hasn't made it yet,
I feel fallow, tell tales to my buffalo,
     she moos at my discontent
              and the choleric of my kith and kin,
prevents me from calling him a rogue,
     though he has left me to wither here,
             though he has left me alone.

Jede Chadd ke chal gaye ne…                                       
        Those who have abandoned us and gone…

Throughout Punjab, we are scattered,
        throughout Punjab, we are alone,
        why did you wed us?
        Why did you leave our home?
What good is the foreign penny,
       slavery of foreign tarts and pimps?
       Come back, o black-hearted,
       Come back to our sweet home.

Jede Chadd ke chal gaye ne,                                       
         Mawan, dhiyan, khetran, gawan nu,                     
Undi raah kyun takdi aye,                                              
kyun aaun ge o tainu le jawan nu?                               

Those who have abandoned mothers,
         fields, daughters, villages, and gone,
Why do you wait for them?
        Why would they return to take you along?

Your forefathers fought invaders,
       never quit, never let their land go,
kept heads high in proud turbans,
       never balked or gave their women woe.
“O Ranjheya, your banter: how do you translate it?
      Your Punjabi heart-to-heart: how do you communicate it?
Are you legally there? Are you really there?
      We are aging. We'll die. When will you ever make it?”

Jede Chadd ke chal gaye ne…        

                             Those who have abandoned us and gone…

But what can I say, had you stayed back,
       I would have urged you to leave,
when destiny calls with dollar bills,
       staying back for mud-dung is grief.
But I was wrong, marjaaniyan
      
how I wish he were never gone,
I know he must be more miserable,
      at least I am in my home,

What pagli is this 'lady',
      lives in a world of make-belief,
if the bride was ever worthy,
     why would the groom ever leave,
But tell me what I must do,
     but tell me where I can go,
In this dust, I must live and die,
    maybe after death, reunite in a Canadian home.

Jede Chadd ke chal gaye ne...                                       

Those who have abandoned us and gone…



Vivek Sharma's first book of verse, Saga of a Crumpled Piece of Paper (Writers Workshop, Calcutta, 2009), was shortlisted for Muse India Young Writer Award 2011. His work in English appears in Atlanta Review, Bateau, Poetry, The Cortland Reviewand Muse India, among others while his Hindi articles and verses appear in Divya Himachal (Hindi newspaper, India), Himachal Mitra, and Argala. Vivek grew up in Himachal Pradesh (Himalayas, India), and moved to the United States in 2001. Vivek is a Pushcart-nominated poet, is published as a scientist, and he lives and teaches chemical engineering in Chicago.

Monday, May 29, 2023

THE NEW WORLD ORDER

by George Salamon


Nette Reed checks on Desi Hurd, 62, near the Human Services Campus in Phoenix, where there are several major shelters, a medical center and respite centers. (Caitlin O’Hara for The Washington Post)


"The lie has become the order of the world.” Josef K. in Franz Kafka's novel The Trial

"More people in the country's biggest cities were becoming homeless, more were living outside instead of in shelters, and a record number of people from LosAngeles to Denver to  New York were dying in premature and preventable ways on the street." —The New York Times, May 13, 2023

“Nearly a quarter of a million people 55 or older are estimated by the government to have been homeless in the United States during at least part of 2019, the most recent reliable federal count available.” —The Washington Post, May 22, 2023


Josef K. uttered the lesson he learned
as he was about to die, the lesson our
homeless have not yet fully grasped:
they, like Josef K., have no right to live
because they are abandoned and weak.


George Salamon thinks most of our politicians are not eager to deal with homelessness (or poverty) because their sponsors would tell them they're wasting their money, while it's OK to throw money to the Military-Industrial Complex because it does its money-wasting for a Strong America.