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Wednesday, March 04, 2026

MASS SHOOTING #9



“Two people dead in Detroit shooting at funeral repast, police say”

CBS News Detroit



by Ron Riekki





“Justice is what love sounds like when it speaks in public.”

—Michael Eric Dyson

from Can You Hear Me Now?:

The Inspiration, Wisdom, and Insight of Michael Eric Dyson



75 days since the last mass shooting in Michigan,
But that’s over with the warmth, having back-to-back
 
mass shootings on Feb 19 and Feb 27.  One in Flint,
one in Detroit.  I drive to the one in Detroit first,
 
the shooting happening at a “funeral repast,”
a phrase I’d never heard before, a gathering after
 
a funeral.  Where two more would be killed.
On the drive there, I see a park and think to myself
 
how nice that they have a park here, until I realize
it’s not a park, but a cemetery, that seems to go on
 
and on and on, and on the same street a billboard of
RECOVERY IS HERE / HOPE IS HERE next to
 
a cannabis shop, a couple of liquor stores, one
with a wide OPEN sign, massive glowing white
 
sign, a vulgar-sized sign, as if the OPEN has more
than one meaning, as I think of stores being open
 
late at night when everything else seems closed
and mouths open to swallow alcohol that turns
 
into acetaldehyde, toxic, classified as carcinogenic,
Jekyll and Hyde, and hid to the side is a closed club,
 
sign saying Escape Lounge, a cell-like building,
reminiscent of incarceration, windowless from what
 
I can see, and I think of Escape, its meanings,
fantasy, and for real, the risks of escape, and there,
 
so near, is the spot of the mass shooting, two killed,
two injured, and so many of these mass shootings,
 
over and over, are in areas that feel apocalyptic,
post-apocalyptic, pre-apocalyptic, barren, not one
 
person walking by the entire time I was there, empty
streets, the rare car, and fence, always fence, so
 
much fence, barbed-wired fence, but with gaps,
where it’d be easy to squeeze through the fence,
 
by the Smile you are on candid camera warning
that warns no one, ghosts, the creepy feel, always
 
so creepy, how empty these areas are in the heart
of urban populations, the two-thirds of a million
 
people in Detroit, none here, not now, a full moon,
and, looking up, an American flag flapping on a pole,
 
a pole that looks like it may have been set on fire
once, long ago, and the flag, absolutely battered,
 
comically tattered, tragically tattered, flicking in
the wind, its large holes, a fuck-you flag, a forgotten
 
flag that seems to scream to tell a story, the full moon
behind it, an alarm somewhere going off, a parking
 
lot that feels the opposite of a lot, feels minimal,
and across the street a strange abandoned-looking
 
warehouse with a massive pile of metal-like boxes,
stacked, left, rusted, the feel that this is the sort of
 
place for a where-they-hide-the-body Sopranos
scene.  I’m sick of visiting these mass shootings,
 
wonder why I’ve committed myself to visiting
every mass shooting in Michigan, searching, trying
 
to find out when, who, why, what, how, but all
that seems to emerge is where, the place sticking
 
in my mind, the constant poverty of these places,
reminding me of a therapy emotion wheel I saw
 
that lists the ‘feelings’ of being ignored and being
victimized as being rooted in the feeling of being
 
abandoned, which is all rooted in sadness, this
ignored + victimized = abandoned = sadness,
 
and these are ignored buildings, victimized
buildings, buildings of sadness, abandoned
 
buildings, except ‘building’ isn’t right.  They
do not seem to be verbs, to be expressing action,
 
but instead express inaction.  What’s the opposite
of a verb?  And an alarm alarms always as
 
I stand there, constant alarm, somewhere, dis-
embodied, and it’s cold tonight, somewhere
 
in the mid-twenties, but these shootings happened
when it had warmed up, the 75 days without
 
a mass shooting due to the winter, no mass
shootings because there was no ‘mass.’
 
There were shootings here, nonstop, all
winter, but one person shot, two, three,
 
not ‘mass.’  Now, with the warmth, they’re
back.  And I drive away, to see a Coney
 
Island restaurant selling Kentucky dogs
and catfish dinners, vomit in its parking
 
lot.  A sign for CHILD CARE, another
sign for CHILD CARE, and it feels like
 
a wish, an instruct, a plea.  I stop at a bar,
open, a man stepping outside to smoke.
 
I approach.  By the time I get there, it’s
three men, smoking, chatting.  I interrupt,
 
tell them about the mass shooting so near
here, ask how we end the violence, tell them
 
I’m noticing it’s a theme of young black men
killing young black men.  These aren’t
 
young black men, but see themselves as
old black men, and they talk about young
 
black men, talking more than I’d have
guessed, opening up as if they’ve been
 
waiting to speak on this.  The first man
says, “I’ll kill someone before they kill
 
me.”  He leaves, goes inside the bar,
and another man replaces him.  We four
 
stand in a diamond shape.  Their names:
“Frank,” “Sam,” and “J.”  J is a hip-hop
 
artist, has no album, insists he’s not
a rapper, but a “hip-hop artist.”  It’s
 
open mic tonight.  The language goes
fast, faster than I can scribble: “A lot
 
of black folks go through poverty.”
“My grandma had fourteen kids.”
 
“I blame women.”  I interrupt, a bit
shocked at this, the first time this
 
has been said in the hundred people
or so I’ve interviewed so far at these
 
mass shooting sites.  And he brings up
childhood sexual trauma.  Again,
 
the first time this has been brought up
in the hundred or so interviews.
 
he talks about how this is happening
to young black boys.  I tell him he’s
 
the first person brave enough to say
this.  The man standing next to him
 
joins in, says, “I’m a victim of that.”
I say, “Childhood sexual trauma?”
 
He nods yes.  And the language takes
over again, this investment in their
 
words: “I’m not going to blame it all
on the women.”  “You need family.”
 
“Every person that’s a white person
has a family.”  “Kids raising kids.”
 
They talk over each other, at the same
time, not disrespectfully, but this isn’t
 
an academic question posed to some
academics.  I talked to two social
 
workers at U of M, asking the same
question, and their responses to me
 
felt textbook, crafted, safe, cliché,
emotionless.  This isn’t that.  They
 
talk bodily, about their bodies, arms
emphasizing, eye contact intense,
 
patting each other on the back, saying,
“Slavery fucked people up.”  “They
 
tricked us, man.”  “Get Trump out
of office.”  “No, no, that was way
 
before Trump.”  One tells us of his
Dad joining the Army, then becoming
 
a Detroit cop.  He says, “I stay in
the hood; I stay in poverty.”  “You
 
need the old wisdom.”  “They don’t
have tough love, so they don’t have
 
respect.”  “I’m a third-grade teacher.”
“The solution is putting that belt to
 
that ass.”  “I done seen people get
shot.”  The man to my left tells us
 
about his cousin being shot.  Where?
Right here.  Where exactly?  He points,
 
says his cousin was shot in the head
right here, in this hallway, right here.
 
He points at the hallway we can see
through the door of the bar.  Right
 
here, his cousin was shot in the head.
Where we’re standing.  Right here.
 
The pace picks up.  Adrenaline.
“Look at Emmett Till.”  “It’s all
 
about history.”  “I was in the Army
for sixteen years; I’ve seen a lotta shit.”
 
“We gotta get rid of these guns;
we gotta get rid of these drugs.”
 
“The government’s got to stop.”
“It’s the social media.”  “I play
 
saxophone.”  They smoke.  They
care.  They argue.  They agree.
 
“You gotta stop the guns.”  So
many of these interviews, no
 
one talks about guns.  The discussion
is mass shootings and no one
 
talks about the guns.  So many liberals
I talk to, they never talk about
 
the guns.  I talk to liberals who
own guns, and I don’t understand
 
it.  It’s like the NRA has tricked
them.  “Always stick together.”
 
“Everybody is in control of their
life.”  “This world is about dollars.”
 
What’s the root of the violence?
I ask them.  “Jealousy,” comes
 
the answer.  They talk about
poverty, about seeing wealth
 
on social media.  They “want.”
It’s getting colder.  Midnight
 
nearing.  People pour inside.
A man comes out, tells J he’s
 
about to go onstage soon, very
soon, telling him to get ready.
 
He’s got his hood up, red.
He’s a poet.  He’s about to
 
take stage.  I want to go in,
but I forgot to take any money.
 
I can’t go in.  I watch him
disappear into the hallway
 
where the man to my left
had his cousin get shot
 
in the head.  Right here.
Where we're standing.
 
 


Monday, August 04, 2025

MASS SHOOTING #2



by Ron Riekki




“Dandelions bare art of

endurance”

—Semaj Brown, 

First Poet Laureate of Flint, Michigan,



            i

 

4 injured, 1 killed, across from a church surrounded by endless fence and on the other side of the fence    concrete           and on the other side of the church more concrete  with piles of rubble fenced off and empty parking spots overgrown with crushed weeds and church windows you can’t see into and           120 air quality Unhealthy for Sensitive Groups        and a NOTICE WE ARE NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR YOUR VEHICLES OR PERSONAL ITEMS on the wall of the building that’s painted pure black jet black onyx black charcoal black the entire building black    and the white-silver moon in the sky cut in half   in the smog sky           and crickets crickets crickets mixed with distant traffic and  the losing wind            and the wall is black every bit of it black with black wall and black garbage can with a full black plastic bag and a big black bucket near the painted black front door with thick white-silver locks thick locks and a gated door and no one to ask questions to nobody no bodies nothing just crickets and clouds and lights of the church and distant loud-soft traffic and a train warns its arrival somewhere on the horizon green overtaking the white-silver concrete and a telephone wire swings in the wind lazily and someone was killed here right here  a long thin orange construction cone leans against the fence like it’s having a smoke            and the wind and the crickets and there is no one anywhere and you feel the sin of corporate decay and the sick concrete clouds and the desperate crickets

 

 

            ii

 

down the street an absolutely massive sign for LEGACY FUNERAL CHAPEL

 

 

            iii

 

and before leaving

 

a security guard

alone

in a white car

on the other side

 

of a fence

 

and I pull over

and I walk up

to the fence

and he gets out

 

and walks up

 

to the fence

and we talk

through the fence

and he’s in white-

 

silver uniform

 

and he’s white

and it’s a black

neighborhood

and he’s white

 

and I ask him

 

if he knows

about the mass

shooting

and he says,

 

“I can’t speak

 

to any journalists

or lawyers”

and I tell him

I’m not trying

 

to solve a murder.

 

I’m trying to

solve Murder.

I don’t say that.

I think that.

 

I’m trying to

 

understand

why there’s so

much violence.

I say that.

 

I tell him

 

he doesn’t have

to talk about

the murder,

but can just talk

 

about how we

 

lessen the violence,

as a human,

how do we lessen

the violence

 

and he says,

 

“I’m not allowed

to comment”

and he’s robotic

and white and

 

I tell him how

 

when I’ve talked

with white people

in the black neighbor-

hoods where

 

the shootings

 

are taking place,

the white people

are corporate

and tell me

 

they’re corporate

 

and tell me

they can’t speak,

that I need to speak

to the police,

 

and I tell him

 

that the black people

I talk with

talk

because

 

they’re invested

 

in helping their

community

and I ask him

if the white people

 

who are corporate

 

aren’t invested

in black communities

and so that’s why

they have nothing

 

to say

 

and he walks away

silently

and gets in his

white security

 

vehicle

 

and drives away

and he is protecting—

seriously?—

what looks like

 

a thousand white

 

vans

all in rows

in a fenced in

parking lot,

 

all of these

 

white white white

vans, a comical

amount of white

vans

 

that he’s protecting,

 

and he fades away

into the night

and I look at him

fading

 

through the fence

 

that seems to be

everywhere

and how it protects

nothing



Ron Riekki co-edited Undocumented: Great Lakes Poets Laureate on Social Justice.